Where's Elizabeth? About and a bit of talk!

As I wrote in my first post, I've created a horror series called "Where's Elizabeth?".
I decided to give such summary, as I hope many people will enjoy the series.

"20 years ago, a sixteen old girl vanished away. Witnesses said that she was at the graduation party. They also mentioned that the school's bad guy was there and that he had invited her to take a ride. She had nodded and they walked away. She was later reported missing 2 weeks before a person jogging through the forest saw a body lying on the ground, with bruises, dry blood and it looked like the body had gotten abused to death. The body was later identified as Elizabeth Jones, who was just an innocent girl who would never harm a snail...

20 years later, the legend about Elizabeth is strongly now circulating in the town she was abused in. It said that her spirit would only protect the girls who had black hair, but the guys with blonde hair wasn't safe. Mainly because Elizabeth had black hair too and it says that the murder had blonde hair. 5 kids decided to something horribly. They decided to go to her grave and kick on it...
It later resulted that one girl of the group had vanished away. And her name was Elizabeth..."

So, what do you think? Not to sound rude or anything but I really do like the plot. I have currently only released 2 parts. The first one got 26+ views :D while the second one has only got 9 views. If I've got 30 views on the second part, I'll release the third one.

And also, here's a picture of my user. I accept friendrequests now uvu.